"She Understood it all"
It was a closed room,
and I was dancing with her,
the room was filled with calmness,
and I was just playing with the silence,
though I did not speak,
she understood the silence.
The lights were off,
yet we were able to see each-other,
we enjoyed..and our hearts filled with the light of love,
and the room was filled with her smile,
and I was playing with my imagination,
hope every night be like that,
and she understood it all.
All doors were shut,
even then we felt the most freedom,
and the love we can ever had,
though she was very far if you say in miles,
but we were together only we knows,
and she understood it all.
I was all alone, when you see me,
but I was with her, when I see myself,
it was raining outside,
and I was shivering,
even then the warmth of her made me to smile,
i was feeling her, giving me a very pleasant thought,
I was dancing on the floor,
and she understood it all.
The way we danced,
hope to do the same every time we meet,
the miles will always be there,
but her smile takes me more closer to her,
the love will fill the path with light,
to give me strength and inner peace,
to complete my journey,
and she understood it all.
13 comments:
Wow Man... what a thought ... full of love and only love.... salute hey sir !
great dude.... hats off....
i simply cant believe that this man has written so romantic and lovely poem... really, gr8 work dude
Bhaiya... so much you have said through this poem... about love and freedom and about hope....
Great bro.........
Finally u come up with some of your sweeter experience of your life.
I'm looking for some more experience in your life
Any how binding experience into flowery word.
Great work.keep it up.
jain sahab likha to bahut aacha hai but ye batao kahan se copy paste kiya hai , we engg can only do copy paste lol...
jain sahab likha to bahut badia hai ab ander ke bat batao kahan se copy paste kiya hai , we engg can do only copy paste ...lol....
U have some true love inside u
That's great.......What a romantic thoughts..... I was wondering whether you are that much romantic in your real life??? Anyways that's a very touchy poem... Full of dreams and fantasy......
Thats beautiful...
but you have to dedicate it to some one...you love deeply and purely...
gr8 writing
in simple words expressed ur whole feeling very gud
awesome dude!
Hi Dude....
Superb....
How come u become so much romantic ....?
Awesome Man... It is so romantic and lovely...
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